responded, 閳ユ换 have the perfect idea. Alien Scientist 324 recently discovered a new planet where the people call themselves 'humans.' They live on a Planet Called 'Earth,' the 294th planet found with life on it. But, out of all the planets with life on them, there's is the most uncivilized. They have noses on their faces instead of their arms! Isn閳ユ獩 that weird? They also have two arms instead of three. They are truly ugly looking. Now, let me tell you how unintelligent these humans are. They haven閳ユ獩 discovered teleportation or cloning. They haven閳ユ獩 even discovered how to make devices to allow themselves to contact each other telepathically. Instead, they carry around these large devices called 'cellular phones,' which are truly annoying. They make these ringing sounds.閳?
Alien 10 interrupted. 閳ユ穾s much as I would like to hear about this highly unsophisticated, extra-terrestrial biological entity, what does this have to do with our zoo? You're off subject.閳?
"Well your alien supremeness, I say we teleport to this highly unsophisticated planet, enter in one of their human hospitals, take a baby human, teleport back to our planet, and place him in a zoo,閳?Alien 15 said while putting his three hands in the air widely.
閳ユ窉o you have the coordinates to a hospital on Earth and temporary DNA changers so we can transform into one of these humans?閳?Alien 10 asked.
閳ユ翻hough they might still be stuck in the digital age, we shouldn閳ユ獩 interfere with this civilization. It isn閳ユ獩 nice. How would you like it if someone just put you in a zoo?閳?Alien 13 replied. Everyone laughed simultaneously
閳ユ翻hey're not people, they're humans,閳?someone replied.
閳ユ凡hat are the coordinates to this planet, Alien 15,閳?Alien 10 said, still laughing at the comment Alien 13 a made.
"540 by 905 are the exact coordinates, sir, and here is a sample of human hair. Put it on the DNA modifier. It will change us to humans, but we will still have our superior alien brains," Alien 15 said back as 10 put in the information to his watch and teleported to a human hospital.
"We need to be quick and agile if we are going to succeed," Alien 10 said, looking at a vending machine. "I wonder what a human liquefied edible element tastes like," thought Alien 10 to himself as he tried to get a drink by shaking the machine.
Telepathically and the zoo profits went up tremendously over the pass few days. Plenty of people visited The Global Zoo of Mathgloboor. The human was the greatest attraction after a month the zoo profits rise way higher then expected seventy billion gold pieces .Years went past the human had know knowledge of himself a feral child isolated from humans not able to speak his on lauagage but the zoo was the largest its all of mathgloboor and all of the employees became rich.. The human became like a jungle animal walking on four legs licking up the much they placed on his floor cage. Until one day a Alien 13 was sadden by what the did and decided to make a change. Alien 13 was a extremely intelligent scientist he worked at the zoo from the side. Throughout the years he was working on a device powered by water it could transmit knowledge to outsiders. And he finally was about to hook it up when it was night. He put the wires in the humans brain and transmitted the knowledge that was needed to who he was. I know who I am said the human I want to return to my planet . The only way to can go back to earth is if you meet with the Alien overlord a cruel dictator who runs this planet and who閳ユ獨 ancestor have run
This planet vigorously. Unless you somehow fight him but you wouldn閳ユ獩 have any chances of winning unless you well no. . Tell me I need to go back to my planet for so long I never knew who I was but now I know who I am I don閳ユ獩 even know my name my family said the human. Look walk from here to over their alien 13. And the human did.
Just as I thought the gravitational pull from this planet Is 43653 times stronger then the one on Earth. Meaning you have somewhat adapted to this planet you have gotten used to the high gravity of this planet in comparison with earth if you go back to earth where the gravirt is so low your muscles would have developed further than normal. Making the very strong so you can jump high and low run very fast and possibly fly alien 13 said quietly. But how is this going to help me go back to earth the human said eagerly.
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閳ユ换 have the perfect idea. Alien Scientist 324 recently discovered a new planet where the people call themselves 'humans.' They live on a Planet Called 'Earth,' the 294th planet found with life on it. But, out of all the planets with life on them, there's is the most uncivilized. They have noses on their faces instead of their arms! Isn閳ユ獩 that weird? They also have two arms instead of three. They are truly ugly looking. Now, let me tell you how unintelligent these humans are. They haven閳ユ獩 discovered teleportation or cloning. They haven閳ユ獩 even discovered how to make devices to allow themselves to contact each other telepathically. Instead, they carry around these large devices called 'cellular phones,' which are truly annoying. They make these ringing sounds.閳?
Alien 10 interrupted. 閳ユ穾s much as I would like to hear about this highly unsophisticated, extra-terrestrial biological entity, what does this have to do with our zoo? You're off subject.閳?
"Well your alien supremeness, I say we teleport to this highly unsophisticated planet, enter in one of their human hospitals, take a baby human, teleport back to our planet, and place him in a zoo,閳?Alien 15 said while putting his three hands in the air widely.
閳ユ窉o you have the coordinates to a hospital on Earth and temporary DNA changers so we can transform into one of these humans?閳?Alien 10 asked.
閳ユ翻hough they might still be stuck in the digital age, we shouldn閳ユ獩 interfere with this civilization. It isn閳ユ獩 nice. How would you like it if someone just put you in a zoo?閳?Alien 13 replied. Everyone laughed simultaneously
閳ユ翻hey're not people, they're humans,閳?someone replied.
閳ユ凡hat are the coordinates to this planet, Alien 15,閳?Alien 10 said, still laughing at the comment Alien 13 a made.
"540 by 905 are the exact coordinates, sir, and here is a sample of human hair. Put it on the DNA modifier. It will change us to humans, but we will still have our superior alien brains," Alien 15 said back as 10 put in the information to his watch and teleported to a human hospital.
"We need to be quick and agile if we are going to succeed," Alien 10 said, looking at a vending machine. "I wonder what a human liquefied edible element tastes like," thought Alien 10 to himself as he tried to get a drink by shaking the machine.
Telepathically and the zoo profits went up tremendously over the pass few days. Plenty of people visited The Global Zoo of Mathgloboor. The human was the greatest attraction after a month the zoo profits rise way higher then expected seventy billion gold pieces .Years went past the human had know knowledge of himself a feral child isolated from humans not able to speak his on lauagage but the zoo was the largest its all of mathgloboor and all of the employees became rich.. The human became like a jungle animal walking on four legs licking up the much they placed on his floor cage. Until one day a Alien 13 was sadden by what the did and decided to make a change. Alien 13 was a extremely intelligent scientist he worked at the zoo from the side. Throughout the years he was working on a device powered by water it could transmit knowledge to outsiders. And he finally was about to hook it up when it was night. He put the wires in the humans brain and transmitted the knowledge that was needed to who he was. I know who I am said the human I want to return to my planet . The only way to can go back to earth is if you meet with the Alien overlord a cruel dictator who runs this planet and who閳ユ獨 ancestor have run
This planet vigorously. Unless you somehow fight him but you wouldn閳ユ獩 have any chances of winning unless you well no. . Tell me I need to go back to my planet for so long I never knew who I was but now I know who I am I don閳ユ獩 even know my name my family said the human. Look walk from here to over their alien 13. And the human did.
Just as I thought the gravitational pull from this planet Is 43653 times stronger then the one on Earth. Meaning you have somewhat adapted to this planet you have gotten used to the high gravity of this planet in comparison with earth if you go back to earth where the gravirt is so low your muscles would have developed further than normal. Making the very strong so you can jump high and low run very fast and possibly fly alien 13 said quietly. But how is this going to help me go back to earth the human said eagerly.
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(This has been edited by me, nice story, btw)
He responded, 閳ユ换 have the perfect idea. Alien Scientist 324 recently discovered a new planet where the people call themselves 'humans.' They live on a planet called 'Earth,' the 294th planet found with life on it. But, out of all the planets with life on them, their's is the most uncivilized. They have noses on their faces instead of their arms! Isn閳ユ獩 that weird? They also have two arms instead of three. They are truly ugly looking. Now, let me tell you how unintelligent these humans are. They haven閳ユ獩 discovered teleportation or cloning. They haven閳ユ獩 even discovered how to make devices to allow themselves to contact each other telepathically. Instead, they carry around these large devices called 'cellular phones,' which are truly annoying. They make these ringing sounds.閳?br>
Alien 10 interrupted 閳ユ穾s much as I would like to hear about this highly unsophisticated, extra-terrestrial biological entity, what does this have to do with our zoo? You're off subject.閳?br>
"Well your alien supremeness, I say we teleport to this highly unsophisticated planet, enter in one of their human hospitals, take a baby human, teleport back to our planet, and place him in a zoo,閳?Alien 15 said while putting his three hands in the air widely.
閳ユ窉o you have the coordinates to a hospital on Earth and temporary DNA changers so we can transform into one of these humans?閳?Alien 10 asked.
閳ユ翻hough they might still be stuck in the digital age, we shouldn閳ユ獩 interfere with this civilization. It isn閳ユ獩 nice. How would you like it if someone just put you in a zoo?閳?Alien 13 replied. Everyone laughed simultaneously.
閳ユ翻hey're not people, they're humans,閳?someone replied.
閳ユ凡hat are the coordinates to this planet, Alien 15,閳?Alien 10 said, still laughing at the comment Alien 13 had made.
"540 by 905 are the exact coordinates, sir, and here is a sample of human hair. Put it on the DNA modifier. It will change us to humans, but we will still have our superior alien brains," Alien 15 said back as Alien 10 put in the information to his watch and teleported to a human hospital.
"We need to be quick and agile if we are going to succeed," Alien 10 said, looking at a vending machine. "I wonder what a human liquefied edible element tastes like" thought Alien 10 to himself as he tried to get a drink by shaking the machine telepathically.
The zoo profits of The Global Zoo of Mathgloboor went up tremendously over the pasy few days. Plenty of people visited The Global Zoo of Mathgloboor. The human was the biggest attraction, and after a month the zoo profits rose way higher then expected seventy billion gold pieces .Years went past the human had no knowledge of himself, a feral child isolated from humans not able to speak his on language but the zoo was the largest its all of Mathgloboor and all of the employees became rich.. The human became like a jungle animal walking on four legs licking up the much they placed on his floor cage. Until one day a Alien 13 was saddened by what they did and decided to make a change. Alien 13 was a extremely intelligent scientist who worked at the zoo from the side. Throughout the years he was working on a device powered by water, which could transmit knowledge to outsiders. And he finally was about to hook it up at night. He put the wires in the humans brain and transmitted the knowledge that was needed to who he was. "I know who I am" said the human. "I want to return to my planet" .
"The only way to can go back to earth is if you meet with the alien overlord, a cruel dictator who runs this planet and who閳ユ獨 ancestor have run this planet vigorously" Alien 13 said. "Unless you somehow fight him, but you wouldn閳ユ獩 have any chances of winning unless you, well, no..." "
"Tell me I need to go back to my planet for so long I never knew who I was but now I know who I am I don閳ユ獩 even know my name, or my family" said the human.
"Look, walk from here to over there" Alien 13 said. And the human did.
"Just as I thought, the gravitational pull from this planet Is 43653 times stronger then the one on Earth. Meaning you have somewhat adapted to this planet, and you have gotten used to the high gravity of this planet in comparison with Earth. If you go back to Earth where the gravity is so low, your muscles would have developed further than normal. Making you very stron,g so you can jump high and run very fast and possibly fly" Alien 13 said quietly.
"But how is this going to help me go back to Earth?" the human said eagerly.
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I believe I read this and answered you.The place near the beginning has "there's" which should be"theirs".Cough up the points.You did good.That's the only error.
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